Fine Tuning

Progress continues as Jonathan and I are making one last set of revisions before getting it out for reviews and feedback. We’ve made significant changes since the last cut with more stories from people who know Aki Ra and some restructuring to the order of events. See below for a clip from Aki Ra’s brother-in-law, Sen Ho, describing what its like to demine with Aki Ra.

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